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Writing the Perfect Blog Comment!

13/3/2012

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Today Room 7 looked at how to write a quality blog comment. We used a "6 point commenting criteria' to assess a series of comments, and then we wrote some quality ones of our own.
Here is the list we used:

Six Point Commenting Criteria:

1. Read the previous comments first (so you do not say the same thing someone else has 
    already said).
2. Start your comment with a greeting e.g - Hi Michael. Hello Room 7.
3. Comment about specific details that you agree with, like, observed in their work etc.
4. Use correct punctuation - start your comment with a capital, end with a full stop.
5. Try and spell correctly (use an online dictionary or Microsoft Word spell-checker).
6. Finish with a question if appropriate (this may start a conversation with others).

Example:

Hi Room 7. It looks like you had great fun on camp. I love the photos of people in your class going down the water slide! Their faces were very funny! Was it cold?

Hello Jimmy. What an interesting recount. I really like the way you included lots of interesting information about the animals in your class. Do you take turns feeding them?


Hi Mary, I really loved reading about all the great things you did on camp. The story about your tent falling down was really funny! Thanks for sharing! 
 
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lahana
13/3/2012 01:09:12 pm

Hey room 7.this looks like the comments thing we did last year! if it is cool.....

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Mr Walker
13/3/2012 01:46:17 pm

Hi Lahana. They are the same. You helped to create these last year and they were so good we decided to use them again!

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